CardboardowI's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[IMD]~Luigi's Mansion-!RMX!]

Good concept too much fuzz

This good be an amazing song if you fixed all the fuzz and distortion. Until then its a mediocre song with a good concept.

IceMasterDlux responds:

Thanks man! You're right, there is too much fuzzy distortion and wha-not. i'm glad to hear that because this gives me an opportunity to fix it up and reupload it. Thanks again, honesty is #1! God bless!
~IceMasterDlux ><>

[Leaving You - John Sercu]

Music in its most pure form.

This is exactly why music exsists. I'm not going to critiqe your song because it is music in its purist form. It doesn't relay how you feel, It IS you in these sounds.

You can really feel all the emotion that was put into this work. The only way you could possibly change it to improve the way it sounds would be to change instruments and thats it.

Congratulations on creating a true piece of music, despite what it cost you.

[~`The Race Against Time`~]

Wrong title

Like everyone else said the title doesnt really suit, but neither does final battle, and titles are pretty important.

However It is a good song, I would just suggest a bit more dynamic balance between various instruments and not using the drumroll thing at the end of every little phrase, since it has sort of an effect of diminishing returns if you use it too often.

Grats on the song of the week.

Rhyhart responds:

yea I would change it but it's to late I have to many listens. Thanks for the review though!!!

[DJ Babokon - Double Helix]

Pretty beastly

Other then whatever you did to create a buzz in my ear at 1:50 it was one of the better things ive haerd on the audio portal.

Also, I think you could have made the ending a bit mroe dramatic to fit the intensity of the piece.

Good work.

[Techno Sensation 2010]

Too long to get going

I personally think it took way to long to get 1 30 but after that its so good you still get a nine.

[Fire Magic]

Good stuff.

I think a bit of instrument variety wouldnt hurt. (for the main melody)
and maybe a deeper bass.

However I have nothing else very musical to critique and otherwise its quite good.

[+Energize-]

Good work

Its a damn fine song.

I just think you could have added a bit of depth to the melody by instrument stacking, and maybe added an echo to the effects that you put at the end of prhrases.

ParadoxInc responds:

Thanks:)

[[mU] - Dance Cancer - [Loop]]

Awful

terrible and im pretty sure it was just made to piss people off.

[A-ha - Take On Me 8bit]

Love it.

Love the original, I love the 8bit, it feels so lighthearted. I'd give you a ten but you didnt actually MAKE the song, so you get a 9.

Love it though. Downloaded.

[The End Of All]

Good, but a lil repetitive

I like it, but I think you could have done a bit more. After about 2 minutes it gets repetitive.

I think you could have gotten to the part at 1 30 a bit sooner as well.